According to Sassoon, Jeremy's use of words like "vanity," "envy," and "not a problem solver" as deal breakers are too vague.
"'Does he want someone quick on her feet under pressure? Sometimes, dating app profiles can be seen as cover letters or job applications. Clearly Jeremy is looking for love, though his deal breakers sound a bit harsh," Sassoon said.
She added that Jeremy should be specific about the type of humor he enjoys, like sarcasm or a love of puns, when he says he wants a partner with "a sense of humor."
To secure more compatible matches, she suggested Jeremy reflect on what he really wants in a partner, and keep certain deal breakers to himself.
For example, instead of writing "vanity" turns him off, Jeremy could decide that for himself during a brief coffee or FaceTime date, said Sassoon.
Overall, Jeremy conveyed his hobbies and humor well in his profile. To take it to the next level, he could highlight his physical appearance and who he's looking for more clearly.