According to Ettin, Aaron's honesty and specificity in his bio,
For example, she loved how Aaron mentioned his love of the game Magic: The Gathering, saying that showing off hobbies and quirks is a great way to get other singles' attention.
"Plus the joke about the shower was funny, since it dispels whatever stereotypes people have about those who play the game," Ettin said.
At the same time, Ettin said she'd make a few edits to Aaron's written bio. First, she'd nix the first line, where Aaron says he'll never bore his matches like other men might.
"You have one chance to make a first impression, so don't use it for something that's cliché and puts down others," Ettin said.
Rather, she suggested Aaron jump right into his unique qualities and interests, writing something like:
"Grad student and wannabe chef who likes both artsy adventures and Magic: The Gathering. Lifts all the weights to eat all the foods. Equal parts heavy metal and Taylor Swift (no shame). My job is serious, so the rest of life doesn't have to be."
Finally, Ettin said she'd remove the last line of Aaron's existing written bio, since saying "Best of luck" is unnecessary in this context.