"I love how strong the first sentence is. It's clear what he's looking for. It also shows that he's put some thought into his ideal partner," Simone said.
Since Calvin didn't call out any of his deal breakers in his profile, Simone suggested he tack on a line that read something like, "I appreciate someone with a passion for something. What's something unique that you're into?"
This can also be a way to spark conversation with a potential match, Simone said.
She also liked how Calvin called out his interests without rambling on about them, though she would replace the word "weird," she told Insider.
"While it's clear that he means it to be playful, coming from a stranger, that word could potentially signal a lot of different things," Simone said.
She'd replace it with something like: "I'm really into the work that I do. I also dig new experiences, unique art, unique wine, and unique movies."